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4. My two cents...

Fri Jan 8, 2021, 02:04 PM

Jan 2021

Maybe add a little more detail to the background? And possibly darken the water in the middle of the painting?

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Help, updated [View all] GreenPartyVoter Jan 2021 OP

Yes, it is salvageable lunatica Jan 2021 #1

Your finished one looks very good! lunatica Jan 2021 #9

Thank you! GreenPartyVoter Jan 2021 #6

add a bit of pastel? or a few strokes of gouache? mopinko Jan 2021 #3

grab a small set of derwents water color pencils then. mopinko Jan 2021 #10

My two cents... bif Jan 2021 #4

Thanks! GreenPartyVoter Jan 2021 #8

I like the changes. bif Jan 2021 #11