Signs of the times down at the dock.

[lunatica]

1. You're really getting good at controlling your washes

I like your mixture of inking the outlines, but that you didn’t do it on all of them. A lot of what you would draw with ink you aren’t doing but you’re using the color washes to depict them. Like the tiles on the roof and the bricks on the wall of the building.

I like the blue sky with the clouds and particularly the way you show the rectangular glass panes of the far window through the the close window panes. It’s an excellent detail that stand out very well.

Excellent!

Did you change the way you put your canvas when you’re painting? This painting is more precise, and shows you took care to make the lines cleaner and straighter.